The land is a blanket covering the marshmallows hidden underground.
The howling wolf wind goes around the town and through the forest.
I see people walking in and out of shops they turn into confused animals.
Pets going crazy if someone walked past they threw them a surprise party.
The sky wears a Diamond rainbow necklace it's going to a party
Can I eat the sugar?
Is the ground made out of sugar?
Are the houses and animals made out of sugar?
Reflection
I am learning to write ekphrastic poetry (writing a poem about a piece of art)
I think I am going well because I can write many sentences using metaphors but I need some help to get started.
My next step is to connect the metaphors together to help the reader build a image.

Wow Rosa incredible and amazing its brilliant
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ReplyDeleteI like how you say the land is a blanket covering the marshmallows hidden underground.😋