Thursday, 18 February 2016

Where is my happy place

My happy place is where
the Dolphins splash,
in and out of the waves.

Where the crabs,
pop in and of the dark blue sea,
playing hide and go seek.

Where the cabbage trees,
dance in the warm summer breeze.

Where the tui puff out their chests,
showing off to their friends.

Where the fantails fly from tree to tree,
in the morning sun.
 
This is my happy place.

3 comments:

  1. Wow Rosa this was a very well written post! I liked how you said Tui puff their chests out showing off to all their friends because I can imagine that because the Tui is such a show off. I also like how you said the crabs played hide a go seek in the shells because it reminded me of playing at the beach and looking under rocks to find shells. I love going to the beach and swimming in the water then getting too cold then lying on the sand and then doing the process again. Since the summers going to end I'm going to ask Mum to go out to the beach soon.

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  2. I really love this post rosa.
    I love the start, and how you talk about the crabs playing hide and go seek. This is a high quality piece of writing, and I can't wait to see more.
    Alyssa

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  3. I really love this post rosa.
    I love the start, and how you talk about the crabs playing hide and go seek. This is a high quality piece of writing, and I can't wait to see more.
    Alyssa

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